Kingdom Carrier

Wow. Posting a story online makes you seem a lot smarter. :lol: Your story is great, and it drags the reader into the beginning of a fantasy, but you definitely ...

Thank you. The whole reason I posted my story online was to get a real look at what I need to do to make it better. I am open to ...

I try to keep things realistic, but face it, it's fantasy! I don't separate my stories into chapters, but I'll keep it in parts. Enjoy! ........................................................ "Come o

Redwall is an amazing series filled with adventure, food, furry heroes, and... more food! The description is cool, but it is a story both for someone with patience and the ...

I agree with canislupis. This is a story where you have to read the whole thing before you can understand it. Hey, that just builds suspense. I like how you ...

I really liked your story, or what of it is here anyway. It is good that it is full of new description every line, but you have to make sure ...

Oh, and by the way, I joined at the request of a friend. I don't have her username yet, but her name is Alison. She is an awesome author/novelist/artist, with ...

Hello, my name is Matthew. I'm a new member, but I already love to talk about my stories and such. I haven't really figured out the whole avatar thing, but ...